It’s possible to tell a lot about a manuscript based on the first twenty-five pages. This critique service offered with a quick turn-around time could be just what you need to strengthen your story without a hefty price tag. While a critique of the first twenty-five pages can never replace a full manuscript critique or developmental edit, it can point out weak spots that might keep a reader from continuing. It can also turn up foundational problems that will affect the rest of the manuscript.
POV,
opening scene,
scene vs. summary,
showing vs. telling,
world building without info dumping,
setting the mood,
and much more.
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